So here you go.
As promised, every Monday, without fail (I hope!) is a new part of my short story, Loved. At least until I run out of story. Then your Mondays will once again be filled with uncertainty.
“Take us on a walk, please!” the children begged Charlie.
They loved to explore the city and see all the grown up people who walked
around, knowing where they were going. Lucas, Collin and Polly didn’t know
where they were going. The big city streets were too much for them to navigate.
All of the adults who could walk around with confidence were so impressive to
their young minds.
“Now if you
look to your left,” Charlie pointed out the view of the local chain store with
a sweeping gesture, “you’ll notice the historical establishment known only to
these parts.” He spoke in a deep announcer’s voice, causing the children to
giggle.
They walked
up and down the streets, carefully avoiding the coffee shop where Charlie had
so magnanimously knocked over his drink. As the sun was sinking low in the sky,
the four of them collapsed on a bench in the park, exhausted. A sea of rose
bushes grew across from them, and they enjoyed the view as the sinking sun
graced the tips of their petals. People liked to whisper that there was magic
in their seeds, magic that could make one fall in love. Charlie wished it were
true.
He was
thinking very romantic thoughts as he watched the wind whisper among the
flowers, their petals dancing with its touch.
While he
was daydreaming, a young woman hurried past. As she was rushing to get home,
the heel of her shoe cracked, and she tripped over her feet. Charlie
immediately jumped up to help her, not seeing her face. He pulled her up from
the ground, trying to brush off the dirt without thinking about what he was
doing.
“Are you
ok? Did you hurt yourself? Do you need anything?” he asked while he brushed her
off.
“No, no,
I’m fine.” She tried to pull away. Suddenly, Charlie recognized her. Her young
innocent face was the most beautiful he had ever seen. But an overwhelming
desire to know the person beneath it filled his being. He smiled.
“I’m
Charlie,” he held out his hand. She looked at him uncertainly, then took it.
“Rebekah,”
she replied.
“Oooh!” the
three children on the bench chimed in. Charlie whipped his head around to glare
at them.
“Thank you,
Charlie,” Rebekah said, and then turned away.
“Rebekah
wait!” Charlie called out. “I can’t have you walk back home with a broken
shoe.”
“I’m not
going home,” she responded, and kept going.
“No,
please. Let me at least call you a taxi,” he said. She sighed and agreed.
“Thank
you,” she said again.
Charlie hailed
the taxi and paid the fare. “I hope to run into you again!” he called as the
car pulled away. He turned toward the children with a sheepish smile on his
face. The three kids smirked at him.
“Ooh!”
Collin cooed.
“You like her!” Lucas added.
“Oh it’s so romantic!” Polly cried. “Why didn’t
you give her one of the roses?”
Charlie’s
face burned red. “Time to go home,” he said.
“I want you
to make me look beautiful,” Rebekah pleaded with the painted man, her broken
shoes discarded in the corner. He sniggered.
“Why?” he
asked.
“You don’t
ask why, remember?” she responded.
“But you, little naïve innocent thing, why is
it that you think you should be
allowed to look beautiful?”
“Don’t ask
questions, just give me what I want!” Rebekah tried her hardest to sound
demanding.
“Can you
afford that?” he asked.
“What do
you mean?”
“Well you
have to pay for the things you want, little darling.”
Rebekah had
forgotten that small detail. She let it go for the moment. As soon as she got
home, she dug out her savings and counted how much she had. It wasn’t very
much. Perhaps there was something else she could give him…
“Here you
go,” she handed her savings to the painted man. He looked at it quizzically.
“Is that
it?”
She closed
her hand and swallowed. “I will give you anything you want,” she said. The
painted man smiled.
“Are you
sure, darling? How high of a price are you willing to pay?”
“I will pay
what you want to make you want me,” she stated. Her eyes stared straight ahead,
afraid to look him in the face. He smiled again.
“As you
wish.”
He took out
his tools.
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